General, writing

He Said, She Replied

Dialogue is a staple of any story. Along with dialogue, dialogue tags usually go hand in hand with it. That however, brings in the question of how exactly you tag it.

You might have heard the phrase ‘said is dead’ from one school of thought on the matter. On one hand, said is a common tag. He-said, she-said quite literally. On the other hand, you might very well have heard that said scans easily and doesn’t interrupt the reader’s flow.

So which one of those is right? To use said and only use other tags minimally? Or to try and avoid the dreaded ‘said’ verb?

Answering that: which do you prefer? In this case it’s a matter of style. Both have their pros and their cons.

Said Pros:

Said does scan easily which can be great for large blocks of dialogue where you have quick exchanges. This doesn’t interrupt the flow and can help prevent your readers from getting lost in several lines of exchange.

Said Cons:

Said is a very basic way of saying someone spoke, which can lead you into a problem if how someone said something is important. For instance if someone said something in a snappish way, your options are:

  • they said in a snappish way (6 words)
  • they said snappily (3 words)

That however, leads us into

Alternative Pros:

You can say something in a snappy way when you retort, snap or snarl. That’s one word compared to the above versions of six or three. In places where tone and word count matter, alternatives can be invaluable.

Alternative Cons:

Alternatives aren’t always necessary, especially if the words of the dialogue themselves convey the tones being used. Secondly, they can cause unintentional alliteration when paired with certain character names (Rebecca retorts, Sam snarls, Quinn questions and so on and so forth).

Whatever you choose, it’s going to come down to your personal preference. You may find you prefer ‘said’ for some situations, and an alternative for others.

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